Wednesday, 1 March 2017

The Sight Of Serena

I was in the school library with Serena. There was a very strange book on the ground. Yellow shiny dust surrounded it. I picked it up gingerly . I opened it up and discovered, it was a portal. I showed it to Serena who was standing in the opposite aisle. She came closer to look at the book but however she was sucked into the portal. I quickly followed her in. The current pushed me in all directions. I saw Serena. The gown she was wearing was remarkable. I opened my eyes but then everything was white. I couldn't see anything......

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

You explain your story really good
Good job!!

Malou Jensen said...

Hi Joanna,
I loveeeee that your story is about a portal.

Mr Paul said...

You do love these cliff-hanger endings, don't you?!