One beautiful and sunny day me and my younger brother Noah went to the majestic beach to make sand castles. A boy with a group of friends dug a wide and deep hole hoping that someone will fall in. As me and Noah were running side by side Noah fall in the hole and I laughed so hard that I cried. Suddenly karma struck me. I laughed too hard and fell in the hole with Noah. That day was never to forget so me and Noah kept on blowing our heads off with laughter when we kept thinking about it.
6 comments:
I really like the ending because it is relatable.
Karma always catches up with you!!!
Careful with the past tense. "As me and Noah WERE running side by side Noah FELL in the hole and I LAUGHED so hard that I cried.
I really like your story
I like your story it funny.
Nice story I really like it
Hi Valencia,
I really like that you told us the name of the beach.
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